NieR : Automata

I'm not a user of English but I will try.

The coloring is nice. If I did it, I focus a little bit more in the shades.

The presentation it's nice and style or techinque cool but I know you can do it better! Maybe a half body or 2/3 give the art more impact.

The lines of the clothes are very soft and nice, they work well with the background you choosed. The black circle it's perfect with that degradent, it's a nice plus for the impact!

I hope my comment was for help, and sorry about the mistakes on my English!
Keep it doing!!