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|Commission| Darkstalkers: Q-Bee by JELLYEMILY |Commission| Darkstalkers: Q-Bee by JELLYEMILY
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I would like to start off by saying that this is really good, and I don't see many things wrong with it. I will say that I'd like to see her wings just a little more glossy. I also think that the shading could be just a bit better, plus I think her feathering, or fur needs just a little more texture.

I will say that I love how she looks seductive, yet I think she might try to kill me or at least capture me.

I also think you did great with contrast the sunset and her color play off nicely.
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A couple of things before I start:
1.-I won't give 5 stars on any category, as there's no perfect draw, there's always room for improvement.
2.-I'm very bad at giving critique, what I mean is that I don0t like to beat around the bush, so I'll be direct, meaning that I prefer to focus on the things that are wrong and do little to no praise, which some ppl find rude, but it's not the intention. Know that anything I don't critique, menas it's good or I'm ok with it.

BG: The blur effect gives it a nice realistic touch, although it would appear you use it to mask the fact you don't like to do this type of landscape, since not all the flowers should be blurred, the ones in the foreground and the ones where she is sitting on, should be clear. As for the colors, they seem to complement Q-Bee's own pallette.
Anatomy: Seems relatively good for the most part, but her shoulders are a tiny bit lower than normal, I guess the "fur" on her neck threw you off and made you make the neck longer than necessary. Her left hand seems to be bending at very uncanny ways, unless she has hypermobility syndrome. The waist also is in a rather awkward position to be sitting, to be honest, I can't tell where is she sitting on (or if she's just kneeling, it's even more awkward), and from the looks of it, it lloks like her right buttcheck is way more big than her left one. Her visible knee should be way more big to make for the perspective effect that it is closer to the "camera". Hips looks generally wider on her right side. Her stinger, from what I've seen in the game and original desing, comes from just a tad above her butt, or it starts from her lower back, to be more prescise, but you out it as it's literally coming out of her butt, wonder how that would look from behind. Breast are good shaped, they aren't just 2 balloons. Shading looks good enough, can't say anything too deep on that since I very inexperienced on that. Face it's whatever, it's your interpretation, although I'd say you made her look a tad older than she looks in the games.
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SuperSUfan Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2017
Sweeeeeeeeet
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JELLYEMILY Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:) :)
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D3RX Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2016  Student
BEE-autiful!!!
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JELLYEMILY Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thankie :)
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Deviljackies Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2016
Nice work ~ I love :3
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JELLYEMILY Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thankie <3
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JELLYEMILY Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
<3
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Seppaqueas Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2016
Thank you so much for this. I absolutely love it. <3 It has become the best wallpaper!
I want to say more, but I need gather my thoughts to paper :)
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JELLYEMILY Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You are welcome :) I'm glad you love it! And, thank you <3
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Seppaqueas Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2016
Did I say that I absolutely love this- cause I absolutely love this and I find myself not knowing where to start.

A beautiful peachy sun sets over the hill, casting them in dusky purple and setting a tranquil atmosphere. It a breathtaking sight as the colours fade off into the distance.
And I can feel the serenity as Q-Bee rests among the flowers, taking a moment to enjoy nature and to bee one with all. She has a shine, a glimmer that sparkles- on her outfit and her skin. It highlights her hair, swirls of purple and cream so tasty, and adds life to her deep black eyes. The love she expresses, her pleasure derived from her nature as she smells the flowers-- the sweet scent tickling her senses. It stretches down her body, and leaves her swooning. It's in her eyes and the glittering smile of her luscious lips that speaks of her sensual glow. I feel it as an invitation, the whole scene. All set picture perfect at her behest. For just that moment to bee, and that was all it needed. The beauty of nature, and her pleasure. Beautiful.

And I cannot not mention her fur- the fur upon her outfit feels so tangible. Soft and amazingly fluffy, holding a depth and volume. I can easily imagine how soft it would feel, and just wish I had something so nice to snuggle into.

You've done a wonderful job. Thank you so much! :)
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Daro1234frog Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
awesome bee bzzzzz :>
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JELLYEMILY Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks :3
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squirrelyjoel Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Its hip to FUCK BEES (this looks good I like it)
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JELLYEMILY Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
<33
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squirrelyjoel Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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